I used to be the darling of heaven

From an editorial perspective, this work is more of a character sketch or a short vignette than a full-fledged novel. The primary strength lies in the clear establishment of the character archetypes; the contrast between the soft-hearted Fang Yunxi and his unrestrained partner provides a focused emotional hook. However, the most glaring weakness is the lack of substantial content. With only two chapters marked as completed, there is virtually no room for plot development, world-building, or meaningful conflict resolution. While it effectively sets up a specific BL dynamic, the brevity leaves the narrative feeling unfinished and skeletal. Given the zero view count and the minimal chapter count, it functions as a conceptual piece rather than a readable story. It fails to provide the value expected from a completed novel, serving only as a glimpse into a premise that never fully unfolds.