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Fast time travel: my family's old attack is pitiful

by菠萝炖仔
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  • 🕘UpdatedAug 12
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The story follows Shen Mu through a series of disparate realities where his partner is consistently depicted in a pitiable state. Across these worlds, the partner shifts from being physically disabled to a zombie, a bankrupt failure, or a fool, creating a recurring dynamic of caretaking and absurdity. This work reads like a collection of surrealist BL vignettes, utilizing the world-hopping trope to explore various comedic scenarios. It is intended for readers who enjoy lighthearted, eccentric romantic prompts and absurdist humor. However, those seeking a complex, long-form narrative or emotional depth should skip it. The pacing is rapid and fragmented, shifting scenes quickly to highlight the irony of each situation. The standout quality is the quirky, almost slapstick approach to the relationship between the leads, culminating in a bizarre encounter with a demon spirit.

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12 Aug

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4.5/10
Story4
Pacing5
Characters4
Value5

From an editorial perspective, the novel presents a creative conceptual hook by flipping the typical powerful lead trope on its head, replacing it with a sequence of unfortunate partners. This absurdist approach to the BL genre provides a refreshing, if chaotic, reading experience. However, the work suffers from a critical lack of substance. With a total chapter count of only one, the narrative is far too brief to be considered a novel, functioning instead as a series of disjointed sketches. There is no opportunity for genuine character development or plot progression, leaving the reader with a feeling of incompleteness despite its completed status. While the premise is amusing, the execution is hindered by its extreme brevity, making it feel more like a conceptual experiment than a finished story.

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