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Synopsis
Su Bai is reincarnated as a Saiyan in the Dragon Ball universe, where he spends twenty years training through sheer discipline to reach a combat power of three million. Just as he is poised to achieve the Super Saiyan transformation, a divine selection system finally activates, offering rewards for tasks that are often outdated or redundant. This story reads like a classic power-fantasy progression novel with a satirical twist on the 'system' trope. It is ideal for readers who enjoy 'what-if' Dragon Ball scenarios and overpowered protagonists, while those seeking a slow-burn character study or strict adherence to canon should skip it. The narrative is fast-paced, skipping the initial struggle to focus on high-tier combat and the irony of a late-arriving cheat mechanism.
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Editorial Review
This fan-fiction provides an entertaining subversion of the typical system-based progression by making the protagonist successful before the magical aid arrives. The strongest element is the comedic irony found in the system's poor timing, particularly when it assigns goals involving enemies the lead has already defeated. However, the work suffers from a lack of visibility and a reliance on familiar tropes that may feel generic to seasoned readers of the genre. With 85 chapters, it has established a steady rhythm, but the narrative depth is currently shallow, focusing more on numerical power increases than emotional stakes. It functions well as a light diversion for fans of the franchise, though it lacks the originality needed to transcend the limitations of its source material.












