The Devil's Favourite Obsession

The author successfully blends the grounded grit of a crime syndicate with supernatural stakes, creating an atmosphere of oppressive tension. The focus on the psychological toll of the protagonist's past adds a layer of depth to the central obsession. However, with 83 chapters and a self-described focus on building a solid foundation, the pacing may feel sluggish for readers wanting immediate plot progression. The heavy reliance on dark romance tropes risks predictability if the supernatural elements remain secondary to the power struggle. As an ongoing work, the promise of redemption provides a necessary light at the end of a very dark tunnel, but the narrative currently leans heavily into the toxicity of the relationship. It is a focused character study in trauma and power, though it requires significant patience from the reader.